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you are the boy
whose eyes are falling stars
with a body like reeds
and the steel ribcage of starving city skylines
your mouth tastes like sunshine
even in the dark
and your eyes are mountain ranges
in which i am
lost

and i am the girl
riding chariots of storms
into the fury
of the words and worlds and our lips colliding.

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to the boy i shouldn't be kissing. to the boy i'm kissing anyway.

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Comments

  • good one.=]
    umm the eyes and the mountains thing doesnt seem like a good comparison to me...but it works her.=]

    keep it up

  • really really good stuff
    you don't really come to something this interesting on here much

    i love the bit about sunshine