I havent met you yet
I dont know many things
What you like or how you do
But we have our dreams
We whisper to each other
Whisper standing far away
Though our heart can hear
Hear the voice of love and care
We can write a long poem
About each other anytime
But we will keep some
That will remain in our mind
A contest entry
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this is so beautiful
Two people writing about each other when they've never met. It's certainly possible, and is probably happening a lot all over the world and in several languages.
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very lovely write, they must be very special to you
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SPLENDID
very beautiful write ...
We can write a long poem
About each other anytime
But we will keep some
That will remain in our mind
I loved these lines very much .... very well penned !!!
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I really enjoyed reading this write!
We can write a long poem
About each other anytime
But we will keep some
That will remain in our mind
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really enjyoed this because quite simply - it's true, isn't it? We can never know who's goign to next cross our path. I mean, the ones we love, we might have walked past many a time before in different places, maybe years ago, and not thought for one moment that one of the hundreds of people passing us that day would one day become one of the most important parts of our lives, or what not.
Truly a poem for thought this one, and I really enjoyed reading it - thank you for posting it
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Love it - taking it to bed...the thought...
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mmmm this made me smile and then it reaches my heart so to speak...
it's nice when you open yourself to someone albeit the distance and that certain connection that you both share
and this is when the heart speaks and not the mind
enjoyed this alot
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Well spoken poem from the heart. Putting thoughts to words is sometimes extremely difficult, but you manage to do it very well. Whether my interpretation of this poem is what you meant, i don't know, but i know to me it tells of a person seeding the hand of friendship and keeping the heart open to invite someone in. I really enjoyed this one and love the first two lines and the last two lines especially. I am no great critic as i mentioned to someone else a time ago, but i do know something about the heart, and you definately have a big heart when read in your poems. Take another bow...You're on stage!
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oh . my . fucking . god. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwz; it is absolutely amazing; i love it. .wowww =]
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Such a very beautiful idea, I hope you find that someone, I am loooking also. I have been hurt as well as you, life can be cruel. But this is such a sweet, kind idea of writting poetry together and whispering love notes in ones ear. God bless, and I do hope you find her!
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short and sweet
they just keep getting better and better -
ya know...this poem of yours made me think. i may not have someone, but there is the dream of someone. someone that will fil my heart with unconditional love and beauty...i loved your poem my friend
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You write like me
the last line though, could you use 'thoughts' instead of 'mind?'
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wonderful romance from 'far away' and awesome way of penning it! This is an awesome way of writing a romantic relationship that takes place through lovers far apart from each other.
God Bless,
ZeInkslinger
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IT'S ROMANTIC I LOVE IT YOU DON'T GET TO SEE MANY POEMS LIKE THIS IN THE AGE AND TIME GOOD JOB KEEP WRITING
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Love it!
I believe this is my favorite from you. It's a simple rhyming form that I choose to use a lot, so I'm partial to that This is sweet and genuine and still has an air of mystery or secrecy to it at the end. The last four lines imply leaving something to the imagination.
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interesting...the form is a wee bit shakey, but it's pretty good. have you ever heard th eson "Good Night My Someone" from The Music Man? This poem conveys a similar sentiment to that song.
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hm well I hope it is not for a particular person- trust me it would make her blush and maybe even uncomfortable. Maybe we better have a talk, lol
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Sis you know i will do as you guide me
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AWWWW I love this and wish that a guy would write something so beautiful for me.... You have the gift for words and Im very glad I met you
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very nicely worded. Are you writing about someone in particular!
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Dont you know it my sis?
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I havent met you yet
I dont know many things
What you like or how you do
But we have our dreams
wow the girl will be very happy to know it
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awww this is a sweet piece you've written here..hearfelt indeed through every lines such soft tender love wonderfully written
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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speechless *no comment*
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wonderful I already commented on this one my friend x
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It's a good freewrite but i think you ment hearts not heart. I think you could go more indepth about this poem and so more of what you feel for the other person.
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nice poem you got here. very touching, goo write buddy. just a question have you ever tried rhyming?
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A lovely melancolical poem here, showing how shared care and love are both sweet to the heart and mind and yet need to take place into reality (not only dream or far away romance) to give its all consistency to the feelings. Even deep love has to feel real.
Keep it up !
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Good
Nice, i like it, Have a good day, beautifull expression, -
great
this is tender and beautiful and i love such love by my self
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great love this my brother.. you did a great love poem here.. keep up the good work..
your sister
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I like best the last bit about keeping some in our minds, that is so true. overall this is good, you could have it printed up and send it to people you want to know.
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Soft
A nice soft write that makes the reader smile. It is pleasure to see words not laced with love/sex . A pleasent change on here I must say. happy writing .
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good poem
Your shy! How cute. (I dont know I just had to type that
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Now Here are my favorite lines (all your poems are so good that I can never have only one favorite line!)
favorite line:
"We can write a long poem
About each other anytime
But we will keep some
That will remain in our mind"
I can finaly say that you are way better than me in poetry!
But you will get beat soon enough!
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I dig it!
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Nice
Nice Words, Great work poet! -
A most beautiful write of distant closeness, thank you for sharing, love always Josie
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Wow, I love this one. It conveys such sadness and loneliness, yet hope as well. A great poem.
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This is amazing. So full of sadness and lonliness. Great write :]
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Oh no a sad poem, it makes me feel sad. WHy the girls are like stones?
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very well written. obviously you really love this person or something. Nice write....
Rose
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I like how this is stated, and it is a beautiful piece.
So very true, when two people are so far away. Even though you haven't met, at least you are rest assured, that there is someone out there. To share thoughts and feelings with another around the globe, is a blessings in itself.
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i think this is really sweet, nicely said
thanks for the link and take care
stephanie
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I dont know what to say, really great and this is extra ordinary, i just feel cool
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We all have that special person who lives in our hearts.They may be a distant dream but dreams do come true, Ros
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wow this is beutiful my friend and many of us can relate to your words as to us poets many poems touch our heart and soul the quaility of true friendship is to help each other grow we only have to paint a few words and they have so much impact whether we be close or miles apart we help one another grow and give encouragement of our love shared and it is also so important not to share our dreams or they will never become reality the following line were wonderful
But we have our dreams We whisper to each other But we will keep some That will remain in our mind fantasticly written my friend take care and good luck in the contest
maralisa
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This is the soft touches of love.
a love shared by kindred spirits..
Miles apart, but love pulls together.
best of luck with the lucky man.
Riftkin
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another great poem by you, keep writing buddy
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nice
That is kinda how I feel about you. I dont know since we just met but I feel like if I wanted to I could write about you. -
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I think you can, i will be glad to read that poem.
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A great poem to read, a very good meaningful poem. I think the girl will come to you soon.
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I wish you will find the right girl
and i must say that this is a great poem
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Aw, this is beautiful and sweet. Somtimes are heart's whispers, are louder then our voice box's. Thanks for sharing.
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this is a very lovely, heart-warming poem, thank you for sharing it with me. my only suggestion, really, is that perhaps you could use a brighter color for the poem so that it would be easier to read on this background. keep writing, this is very nice and i hope you find the right person you wish to share this with.
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this is sweet caring
love how it reaches and wants to share
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a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. but it should be I hanen't MET, instead of meet. plz look into it. otherwise a very good poem to read.
We can write a long poem
About each other anytime
these lines are pretty good. -
I like the ideas behind this.
It has a flow.
Thanks for sharing.
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Very nice write! Lovely to have someone to share with and care for...great poem...
Blessed be...
Az
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Hey, this is good, I know what it's like not to have any friends and dream of them. The poem has good rhythm and form
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A lovely read here. I saw nothing wrong with this. Great job!! I really enjoyed this poem. keep the pen flowing!
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awww! nice nice work i like it! so whos this one about?
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