Endurance, intelligence
no barrier.
Form, creation.
no blunder.
Gentle foes,
good omen
carriers.
Riding, majestic,
upon each breath
of thunder.
Author notes
Prompt: Winged Wolves by Aragornlord
Critique
A contest entry
- PIF-Quickie-10x20words by Cannonsfire.
1750 points, ended June 29, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, how do you like my soul??
Comments
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this is so beautiful and each word flowed into the next,
i really do love this, i adore wolves so this is just like awwee for me
keep penning,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Wow....I like yours better.
It simply great. What more needs to be said? Other than good luck which of course you don't need.

~Kystal Angel -
Great take on the picture, the wisdom to take to the skies and spread it around. Loved it. Thanks. Love, C






