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The Ecstasy of Movement

The Ecstasy of Movement within a kiss

 

When two lovers first meet is not to be missed

 

Two hands holding as words are said

 

Will you be mine,

 

Is said as there lips entwine

 

Yet as the years pass and fade away

 

The two young lovers wont die

 

Because in the ecstasy of there fist kiss

 

Are Memories that will never die.

 

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  • iamlost
    August 6

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    I like how this works with the prompt, it's an original take on it that was enjoyable to read.
    Well penned.

    ~lost

  • VainPoetess
    July 28

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    Beautifully written, though I don't see much of the prompt in this poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.