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The Musical

He played me a melody,
atop the Baby Grand
Beautifully orchestrated
for my heartstrings.

With hands graceful and slender,
he strokes the keys,
playing me like a finely tuned piano.
Slowly exploring each cord,
to see what sounds will emerge.

The screams echo
as he hammers down,
and the deep moans follow
when he strikes a lower note.
Powerful emotions are revealed,
reverberating from every surface
as our talents are combined...

        Beautiful music in the making


In that very moment
A new song was created ...
A first time release,
      became ...

    A chart topping hit.


Author notes

I would like to insinuate: what I would like to happen with someone specific. I hear he plays the piano


Definitions of insinuate:

verb: introduce or insert (oneself) in a subtle manner
Example: "He insinuated himself into the conversation of the people at the nearby table"
verb: give to understand
Example: "I insinuated that I did not like his wife"

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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 6

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    I like the play of this the musical metaphors... your heartstrings, the key stroking, exploring each chord, the growing sounds, their emotions vibrating... sounds like music waiting to be heard here.
    Marlene

  • Dalaney gold member
    July 4

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    Jennifer...this is lovely! Thank you so much for entering. A very sensual take on the prompt. Love, Lane


  • breedluv silver member
    June 29

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    Wow! You've been holding back the good stuff, haven't you? And by the way, I play guitar, not piano..


    • pantress
      June 29
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      I remember you mentioning that a few times,lol. Life occasionally kicks me in the ass and wakes me up. I do wish it would happen more frequently. Fantasizing about someone I met yesterday. Not sure that it will ever be reality, but a girl needs dreams,lol.