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Vibrations of Air

Words can not hide.
They are to well formed.

Set in their ancient ways.

Excitement splashes outwards
when their curves contract!

Embracing motives that compel
them to make eyes listen
and ears to forget

their small salient
imperfections.




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  • darell silver member
    July 11

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    Intriguing

    this was a fascinating write that
    peered into a dimension we seldom ponder.
    I like the idea's you set forth for they
    give a majestic kind of mystery to it all.
    nicely done.

  • RoseDaughter
    July 4

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    Well done, i relaly feel the atmopshere here. I really enjoyed reading this. Ive pasted the poem down here so u can embrace and read what amazing things uve created!

    Vibrations of Air
    Words can not hide.
    They are to well formed.

    Set in their ancient ways.

    Excitement splashes outwards
    when their curves contract!

    Embracing motives that compel
    them to make eyes listen
    and ears to forget

    their small salient
    imperfections.


    Btw im having a contest soon, u should join!

  • SEA angel
    July 4

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    Sounds of silence

    Splashing onto page to vibrate into the thoughts and through finger tipped comments of readers. Such was I as I silently slipped into and out of your life. Leaving a wake trailing behind in words without a sound. Vibrations in air sound spoke what in silence thoughts wrote.

    . Rewarded 6