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Sleep my Darling

sleep on
sleep on

go and dream
your dreams
slip away
like a feather
dream your dreams
as ever

sleep on
sleep on

my darling
my beautiful darling
my baby

sleep on
and on

sleep my baby
my love

go and dream
your dreams
slip away
like a feather
dream your dreams
as ever

sleep on
sleep on

my darling
my beautiful darling
my baby

sleep on
and on

A contest entry

this is actually a lullaby i want to use for my baby in the future

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  • Crimson Viper
    July 20
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    eh. this was pretty good... It kind of confused me at first... but oh well... I did like it! Keep up your good work. Best of luck!

    CrimsonViper

  • non existant
    July 3

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    this was really cool, seemed a tiny bit repetitive but thats alright it didnt affect it too much.

    thankyou for entering my contest, i wish you the best of luck.

  • ea silver member
    July 3

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    how wonderful that you actually wrote this with your furure child in mind - it does have a very gentle, lulling quality and you probably have a tune in your head for this; I do as I read it, so I'd say it succeeds.