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Sonnet #1 (What a kiss gets you.)

Tis youth that shines on our great destinies,
And winds of hot amour address our souls.
We cling in glad embrace, enjoying love’s breeze,
While hearts consume the gale that feed their coals.
We feel as though we would be burned to ashes
By the scalding blaze our linked spirits make.
Then your sultry sweet breath on mine crashes,
And your crimson soft lips my thirst does slake.
With a hungry joining of labia,
Inside my loins spawns a deeper needing. 
We do snake dances with our lingua,
And my heated mind thinks thoughts of breeding.
My fingers seek to tell you what I need;
Your fist--my eye--says you do not concede.

Author notes

My first sonnet...wouldn't Bill be proud.

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  • Ruby34
    July 15

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    What a lovely Sonnet..Congratulations in your trophy..very well deserved
    Ruby


  • Tender wolf gold member
    July 15
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    whoohooo...now that's a kiss! melts the socks right off and fills the toes with a burning heat...lol...thank you kindly for entering...wow!