You left your mark here,
a mark of betrayal,
a scar.
A gash in my heart,
that has broken my trust.
I wonder if it was your plan,
from the very start.
To use me.
U S E
me all up,
and then spit me out.
I think you have forgotten
what the definition of friend is..
friends dont steal from one another..
not money,
not clothes,
not men...
Friends are honest.
They keep their word.
But you, you have broken yours
for the last time..
I have built my wall back up...
cemented my trust behind
8 layers of lies and manipulation.
Never again, will I let anyone see
those tiny cracks and crevices.
I am shut off,
shut down,
shut up
you
liar...
I will never forgive you for this..
Your nothing but a blonde
am-BITCH-ion~~~!!!!!!!
Please tell me what you think
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im curious to know what being blonde has to do with it. people say things out of anger however the color of her hair has nothing to do with betrayal and lies. i have people shit on me everyday so i know where you are coming from and i've not only been the recepient but also the one to shit on them..however it wasn't intentional. people make mistakes and anger escalates and produces tension in the air and horrible negativity. hopefully your friendship will recover and if not theres always other fish in the sea and other people out there who care and do not do
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Umm, no, This friendship is not fixable. And I am no longer willing to be used and manipulated so she can feel better about herself. The reference to the hair color was more about her fav movie..and the fact that she is blonde.. it was more a play on words.. and I have never shit on her.. I dont think you can steal from someone on accident....so no hope for reconcilliation. EVER.
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Hi, thanks, those are great lines too me to. They really portray what I am thinking and feeling..
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Thank you, I was pretty miffed when I was writing. I have now moved on the stage of greif. It's like a death really. But sometimes, you just have to do what is best 4 you. And she is in no way, good for me. Thanks again!!
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well, it as more a play on the movie blonde ambition.. because its her favorite.. and she is blonde.. and I took atristic license with it..and no, the friendhip will never recover.. I have several other poems to her. If you read them, you would understand. The title of one is _KAREN..and I can't remember the title to the other, I'll have to look it up.
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You did a very excellent job of venting your anger through poetry. I think many people can relate to this one. I can sense the hurt and anger in the lines. I cant help but to read it over and over again its so good. your an awsome poet keep it up.
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Nice vent
This is a good poem and I think if you come back to it if you're angry at some one else, it'll really develop into something amazing (I say that because it'll be a great starting point with new raw emotin to add)
"I am shut off,
shut down,
shut up
you
liar..."
I really liked those lines. You used the alliteration really well to turn the phrase "shut up" into something extremely intense. That section really caught my eye.
Keep up the good writes!
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Interesting
I can relate to this in many ways. I think it's good once in a while to vent. I liked your poem. keep up the good work.
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wow this is totally full of emotion sounds like someone i know i love the words in this!!!
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Thanks. I was greiving the loss of a friendship. This was written in my angry phase.
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Good vent, hon!
Keep letting it out. Just don't close yourself off to others...only to her! -
everything we do is for God's favor; and remember that His promise to Abraham (as him is father of those believer), we can claim His promise for us also, that He will blessing those who are blessing us and cursing those who are cursing/do bad things to us.
keep faith - that there is sunshine after the rain
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