They same time heals all wounds,
but time stopped they day you left.
The gatekeeper to my heart quit,
he stomped away in his fury,
and now no one stands guard.
Now it lays covered in
dusty memories,
and cobb webbs of pain.
Endless corridors that lead to nowhere.
Breathless moments..
empty without you.
These wounds still seep,
this heart still breaks,
for you.
Please tell me what you think
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I never believed that time heals all wounds. Scars run deep and the pain only festers. The imagery in your poem is beautiful and well thought out!
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Love
And the aftermth of a breakup. Your words may be for many. The ache is real. But oh then age comes on and all is ok. write on poet.
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Time may heal all wounds, but it doesnt seem to get rid of the scars...beautifully written.
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it's in ways...painful...but I am in love with it...I love how different this poem is then most that I've read...I love how you used more then just your heart...
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So painful and very hard, oh the old saying that time heals everything is so sometimes not true, almost most of the times. it never really dies and stays with us.
This is full of ache, how impossible it is to fight our feelings inside sometimes...
I hope you're doing somehow better today
Antonio
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the depth and the pain here brings me the realisation that how much this heart suffers?..ah...you touched the truth of this life...a great work indeed...
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