A legless old woman weeps in the shadows
Tears for the agony she has endured,
After the Beast from Hades has given her eight inches
Right up her unwashed ancient anal slit.
But alack and alas there is more to come:
She must endure the horror as her blind son,
Her only begotten son, joy of her broken heart,
Gets poked to bloody shreds by the Beast's enormous prick.
See how the foul Beast wallows in virgins' blood,
His enormous distorted genitals dripping wetly,
As his devil-minions taunt their terrified victims,
Warming them up before he sodomises them savagely.
Yea, even the flames are too cold for the Beast:
He must have more white-hot hatred to relish the pain;
Thus the devils dance around the screaming virgins
And then the Beast sates his lust in their puny twats.
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A contest entry
- Adults... Kinky by Riftkin.
1400 points, ended July 20, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ghost Writes by BabyBun.
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This is a little strong. What do you think?
Comments
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Ha, I liked this. This probably sounds bad, but I think in a way it's a little funny. Nice write. ;]
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It is quite strong, and not Lovecraftian, but I appreciated the skill you've employed.
I'm left wondering why, how, so many virgins went to hell... lol
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Not really quite right for our contest.
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I knew you would like it. Can I borrow your waistcoat? I have a dead rodent which needs a suitable shroud.
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Wow! I don't know what to say. It was very deep, dark, and sadistic. Anal penetration eh? A topic most would stray from confronting in a poem. On some evil twisted side of my mind, I really liked reading your poem. It was a little refreshing from the everyday poem that is always portraying happiness and sunshine. lol Good work.
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Great entry - thanks and best of luck.
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You obviously have a highly developed sense of irony, dear.
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Not sure what you mean by that, dear?
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Theres nothing wrong with a bit of bum love even if you do happen to be Saten. x
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I've never seen Satan's name misspelled.
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"Bum love" is a nice phrase.
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Holy shit batman
Thats gold
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Gold? No I think you'll find most shit, even holy shit, is brownish.
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Interesting and sadistic...I like it
. The nouns used are erotically powerful and perverted. The concept of the poem is rather quite appealing and the crudeness is actually fitting to Satan's nature of personality. Great work!!
~Emily~ xx
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thank you for entering my contest Riftkin
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Oh, yes. What she said. Trebly glad, when I think about it.
Good luck in the contest.
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This makes me doubley glad that Im not a virgin. Phew!
It is you isnt it? xx
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No, I am NOT the Beast from Hell personally. I was merely describing him. He lives just down the road from me, judging from the sounds I hear through his open window as I fly past at night on the way to my Wednesday evening Sabbat.
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Now this is some kinky imagery of the beast....You have really rocked this one...Boy he's a horny one after the back door treasure....novy
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The "back door treasure"? I shall remember that phrase.
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