My mind revolves around
Broken hearts and bloody wrists
The perfect little stories
With perfect little twists
A silent plea for help
That slides down the cheek
The shattered soul inside
That’s just to weak
The blood that pours out
The slowly emptying vein
The puddle on the ground
The slowly numbing pain
Pitch black clouds
Rain pouring down
Voices keep talking
Without any sound
A body laying cold
A life now ends
People all around
Trying to make amends
Tears now are falling
For a wasted life
The blood that was shed
With the help of a knife
The broken heart
That hid it all
The pain and depression
Until the final fall
A world that now is ruined
A lasting final end
Left alone in darkness
No trace of any friend
The pain now is over
The heartache undone
The tortured soul
That can now see the sun.
Author notes
Don't exactly know where this came from I just started writing it but I like it. It's one of my favorites that I've writen so far. I hope you like it as much as me. Enjoy^_^
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Awesome
WOW blew me away OMG powerful and yet beautiful full of emotion I love it -
AMAZING
I LOVE IT!!!
WOW THIS IS VERY GOOOD!!
I HAVENT READ A POEM LIKE IT!!!
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This is very well written I loved the words you used here, it was so wonderfully done and drenched in all sorts of emotion.
Great write,
Silvos.
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nice
good job. I hope you don't still feel that way, or atleast I hope you feel better about all that's happened to you.
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I like it!
"The pain now is over
The heartache undone
The tortured soul
That can now see the sun."
Best part!
Brilliant!
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