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Into the Paradise of Warm Blankets

His breath is heavy in my ear
And his body pulses above me
He is whispering that he loves me
I admire the ring on my finger
As they curl in his hair
I whisper back that I love him, too
And he moves faster
A shallow moan issues from his throat
Like a plead
So I give him more
One hand in his hair
The other at his back
Lips at his neck
And a moan of my own:
His name.
My breath runs away from me
And my body excites
I find his lips
With my own and give all that I have
I do the those little tricks

That I know will drive him crazy
Another moan.
He is pleased
We roll and I lead

From the floor
Into the paradise
Of warm blankets

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  • rachetr
    August 14
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    Pink and purple backgrounds. Truly, the heart and soul of fluff erotica.
    Very nice ^_^.

  • Lava monsterss
    August 14
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    i usually find erotica very trashy, but this is actually pretty poetic and I liked it.


    • xReesexBaileyx
      August 14
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      thanks!

      I am so glad that I could show you a different side of erotica. Yes, it's sex, but it's supposed to be the sensual side of it, you know?

      Thanks for the comment! And happy writing!

      The Famous Reese Bailey
  • very discriptive... its very nice. So keep up the great writing... and thankyou for thinking that my poem "dancing in the rain" was a good poem.


  • azlyn gold member
    July 9

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    Sensual fun under the warm blankets!!! Thanks for the entry and best of luck!


  • Galaxy2
    July 9

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    The last part of the poem is so pleasure giving...
    'I do the same little tricks
    That I know will drive him crazy
    Like sucking on his tongue a bit
    Another moan
    He is pleased
    We roll and I lead
    From the floor
    Into the the paradise
    Of warm blankets'
    Enjoy yourself, honey!
    And let me know if you want me to join....lol

    Kisses...
    Galaxy2

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