Walking down the street
The woman is shedding tears...
Staring at the lifeless balloon...
which
Once soared high and free
Like a butterfly fluttering its wings
In gusting winds.
So is her heart...
Ripped and torn...
A dying rose left only with thorns!
Her heart bleeds shedding more tears.
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie.. PIF picture Contest.. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
670 points, ended July 14, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
,Sad, Love, Pain, Lost Hope
Comments
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A dying rose left only with thorns!
Love that reference
Sad words, well written
Thank you and good luck
Cindy
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This is such a great write for this contest. Your poem goes perfectly with this picture and i wish you all the best in the contest.
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sweetheart you did an excellent job with this. such a sad thing to have happen.. a heart thats been ripped apart, and bleeding too. bad enough its broken.. tears and broken hearts they go together..
someday her heart will heal, perhaps its already starting to heal.. one never knows
excellent job with the prompt, I have to agree with Soulful Woman, you painted a picture with your words.. a poem that can be seen without a prompt..
beautiful job.
good luck
kat
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I just loved this. You made the picture come alive but even without the picture your words told a story.
Great job..
Soulful Woman
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