Your eyes are lifted to the sun,
While I stand on the moon,
Can't you see that I'm the only one,
Who shivers at your smile,
And tingles with your words.
I want to feel your gaze so strong.
That look of greatness on your face,
Like the calm sea of the moon on which I stand.
so when night will fall, will you stay awake with me?
When the sun falls behind the hill,
The Earth is calm and cool,
Will you fly up here, dear?
Remove my silken shell,
And let me love you today.
Let me feel your kiss,
Let me feel your hand across my body,
Let me know what it feels like to know something like you,
Just stay up here on earth's moon and we'll fly across the galaxy.
Author notes
LOL Looooove!! I plan to make this into a song. If you think it would make a good song, then w00t.
Would this make a good song?
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jaded teardrop
this is really one of your best poems i think. this would make an awesome song, so do what you think is best. the imagery i have in my head stands out from other love poems. usually i don't like love poems because i have bad love memories, but this one is really awesome!!!!
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wow just amazing...happiness within a question everyone wants answered...the third stanza is by far one of the most vivid ive ever read...AWESOME!!!!!!
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