There is a very gentle sound
of a tap dripping
somewhere
but I don't know where
And can hear
a bird
making a fuss
in the arch
where all the sparrows nest.
far away a car revs pointlessly
but
I can't hear you.
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oooooo...Jeff, you are a free verse writer to contend with! This is so touching, poignant, YOU. You have found your way, your voice, and it is breathtaking. Love, Lane
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Wow did you twist at the end here, Jeff. Nicely done. From the perils of insomnia to a heart pull ending. And free verse too. Awesome.
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oh oh oh!! I love this
. I really, really like your free verse!!! This is a tad bit sad too...
bravo.
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I can hear you rustling in the dark
so come get back in bed of dreams
and forget about them drips
s
Love you
Passions
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Yes.
Indeed.
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good
i liked it
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