Sauntering, glamorously inebriated:
gliding along pulsating base-- locked eyes,
no keys.
Jet ringlets draped her booze-flushed face--
sweat highlighted flesh when strobe lights
hit her.
Moistened lips-- guess which.
Perfume-laced liquid courage, she cupped
my face.
Slurring "You're cute,"heady seduction
touted her coherence. Shocked: her tongue's accuracy
piercing mine.
Author notes
Please disqualify if 53 words is too much. I will understand.
True story. Straight and Narrow is the pseudonym for a bar called LiveHouse in my island. SHE WAS HOT.
I must be gifted: I always seem to attract the gorgeous drunk girls. Oh well.
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