Since birth, you have changed me
You have brought smiles to my face
You have taken my heart out of space
So I say to you for time may change
A daughter is beauty at its finest
You have a heart of an angel
Soul so pure, and sweet
You are the most precious gift
God has bestowed upon me
Your smile, your face so tender
Your name reside at the
Highest point in my heart
Your smile quenches the thirst of my heart
You are a dewdrop that washed away my sins
You gave me a different world
So I kneel before you today to bless your soul
For you are the one that I adore
My daughter in my heart your soul lives
Forever and ever, you are the daughter of my soul
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A contest entry
- i deserve a gold. by jossiemarie.
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"Since birth, you have changed me"
"You are the most precious gift"
"You gave me a different world"
These three lines really hit home for me. I've heard my Mom repeat them to me over and over again for as far back as I can remember.
I'm my Mother's only child, and since I was old enough to understand, she told me that I was the most important thing in her life, and that I always would be. She swears that I changed her whole point of view of the world and life itself, and that I had saved her life. That I was the one who finally got her out of the abusive relationship with my Father.
I'm too young to know the type of love for a child of my own, but I can feel it with every hug and kiss from my mom.
This is really a great poem. And it was even better that you daughter inspired it.
-Ashley
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Lovely little poem!
Love the blessing part! Though not a mother, I enjoy watching my sister gaze lovingly on her two sons in love... Ah! To each their own... I wish you well; peace and prosperity to you both!
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I love this
Beautifully written and so true -
This is absolutely beautiful and a
wonderful dedication to your little
girl. I am sure that she will love
reading this when she grows older.
Well done and good luck to you in
this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
This is a very good peice! You did an absoulutely wonderful job writing it! I believe that all babies bring smiles to our faces... espeically our own family... (Like my neice... so precious!!!) Keepu p your great work! best of luck in my contest, thanks for entering.
CrimsonViper -
oh thats lovely, good luck in the contest hun.
what a brilliant dad you are. -
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Jossiemarie
Thanks for you kind wors, and thoughts, God bless.
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awww, This is so beautiful of a fathers love for his daughter. You my dear are a great father to have spoken such words.
How old is your little girl?
Mines 16 now but she still smiles that same smile that blesses me everytime!
Although i called her the tornado lol!
So sweetly written with such tenderness,
~Lisa~
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xianariaslifetime
Thank you for your kind words, I truly do appreciate your kindness, my daughter is 4 almost five, and my son is 2. and I know what you mean, they can grow old but those memroies will never fade, they stained your brain permenantly.
agian thank you and God bless her soul for you.
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