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Darkened Angel

You rise about the worlds woes
what is it you are looking for
angel of the darkened skies in
this world we call earth why are
you hovering above and not join
us in the world below, fallen angel
darkened by the plunging to the earth
you have done.

Do you cry for those lost souls that you
will have returning to the heavens to
be judged for the upcoming day of
hells report? Or will  you cry for
yourself in this fallen from the heavens
towards the human grounds, can  you fit in
or will you stand out, can you see the
fear that is upon my mind?

Or do you not care what it is to be in
my thoughts, I miss him you know the man
that was in my loving embrace, oh darkened
angel what is it that I am suppose to do
now that I am alone, will you come to take
me to that day of judgement or has it already
come which is why I stand here all alone, tell
me darkened angel, am I to live or am I to
die in the painful dance above the world?

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 15

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    Your words express the anxiety of not knowing why this angel is here. You have created many strong images and thoughts for the reader in your poem.

    Thank you for your entry, and good luck!

    Ethereal One