I told me and myself that I
Wouldn't listen today
Myself explained that I and me
Were going to go away
I tried to listen to us all
But myself won't do it
So me will tell I and myself
That us they might committ
Me and myself will run away
But I will stay at home
Babbling to nobody
Our mind will probably roam
Some people call us batty
Some dizzy and some nuts
But none of us are crazy
They just hate all our guts
We'll build a wall around us all
A hidden place for us
It must be strong and very tall
We've nothing to discuss
No one likes me and myself
They only talk to I
But when I asked the rest of me
None of us replied
'Tis such a crazy life we live
Me myself and I
If I would love myself and me
We all could ask us why
Author notes
Bi Polar My daughter
Fav. Poet: Edgar Allen Poe
A contest entry
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sounds more like multipul personality disorder than bipolar, but I could be wrong. For some reason your poem made me think of Gollum from Lord of the Rings. Anyways, I liked this, thanks for entering my contest.
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Thank you for your entry in the contest. A very interesting and slightly funny poem., with good rhyme, but the flow is a little erratic.
All the best in the contest ... Sue and Jeff
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You remind me of my schiphrenic girlfriend
good luck in the contest -
They just hate all our guts,funniest I have ever read.
I so laughed out loud!
you have funniest personality,
with a creative twist of talented.
Gonna to read it again.
God bless sis...
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Thanks, sis, I'm glad you knew me well enough to know the poem was meant
to be funny, Love you tons, D.
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< UM........Allan, It was meant to be kinda
funnily meaningful, not truthful, I don't know, maybe you know me myself and I better than I do??? What makes you think I don't already have God's strand ? I think I do.
Thanks for the bunnies.
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