dangerous devotions devised
delirious debauchery of
dreamy dirty deeds
manic maroon mingled
with misguided maps
makes me mutter
madness
Sopping "Sorries" surrender
sweet silence
fleeting fumbles
contort confusion
remembering red
My words are dead.
My words are dead.
Author notes
Prompt:
http://iwishiwaspretty.deviantart.com/art/run-away-red-34956584
Yup, I'm weird =)
JFD
A contest entry
- Picture Contest by BarbedWireButterfly.
1420 points, ended August 27, 24 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Alliteration Galore. Bring it. by lechap.
380 points, ended September 30, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice style. a solid entry in the contest. thanks, and good luck
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Yes!
I didn't even bother with the pic prompt. I love when you use this style. It is something I am never able to hold til poem's end. I always get ADHD and venture. Loved this and the last two lines repitition just leaves us with a haunting echo. Bravo!!!
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The alliteration! The magnificent alliteration! I have never seen a poem such as this and I have a thing for alliteration. lol. I never give applause (just a habit) but this alliteration deserves it. Sorry for me going on and on about the alliteration but I never see it like this and yeah =D well done and thank you for entering.
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good job on that pic prompt!
cleverly written...each line really created bold imagery!
I love how you twist words to give them
voice!
Way to write!
ears/Seattle BRAVO! BRAVO!
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Thank you for entering. I'm not sure what you'd like so I shall give you a song and a picture. Chose either as your prompt, I don't mind =D
http://iwishiwaspretty.deviantart.com/art/run-away-red-34956584
that's your picture and your song is
Twilight Children by Reflexion
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=48041841
if you neither inspire you feel free to message me =D
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