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Angel's Kiss

This day is done with the setting sun
And the moon calls shadows you’re bound to;
Soothe each distress with a warm caress
With the arms of your true love around you.

CHORUS:
Sleep, sleep in dreams of bliss
And float in the love of an angel’s kiss;
Dream, dream in skies of blue
With the arms of your true love around you.


A mother sings of the love she brings
To a weary child who is grieving,
From pain’s harsh tolls on all tender souls
She heals the poor heart through believing.

CHORUS:
Sleep, sleep in dreams of bliss
And float in the love of an angel’s kiss;
Dream, dream in skies of blue
With the arms of your true love around you.


Oh, child of mine so fair and fine
Let gentle kisses protect you
And rest your head on my featherbed,
Let love and forgiveness infect you.

CHORUS:
Sleep, sleep in dreams of bliss
And float in the love of an angel’s kiss;
Dream, dream in skies of blue
With the arms of your true love around you.


When nightmares cease you’ll dream in peace
‘Till light of dawn shines above you,
Awake refreshed relaxed and blessed
In the certainty somebody loves you.

CHORUS:
Sleep, sleep in dreams of bliss
And float in the love of an angel’s kiss;
Dream, dream in skies of blue
With the arms of your true love around you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Sung to the tune of Greensleeves.

To hear, click this link or copy and paste in your browser.
http://www.geocities.com/overlordwwi/angel.mp3

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23
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    awwwww this is so beautiful, lovely write and good luck in the contests
    Stephanie ♥


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    August 19

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    "Soothe each distress with a warm caress
    With the arms of your true love around you." OH these lines harmonize beautifully with the tune. Delightful to read and feel.

    Your chorus too is quite well done. Nice job with this one. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Crimson Viper
    July 20

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    Nice work. I like how you wrote it. Keep up your good work! thanks for the entry, best of luck in both contests.

    crimsonViper

  • Cannonsfire gold member
    July 17

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    This could be sung as the sweetest lullaby to a child and it has that gentle quality about it to soothe the ills of a day. Wish I had a voice to do it justice. Love, C


  • dp robertson
    July 17

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    I actually like old folk music and I think henry V111 stole the credit for this tune and this is true to both the spirit and the form. This is a really gentle piece that to this sentimentalist is good for the soul

    David

    I see you have lept out from behind the curtain with your name?


    • Cannonsfire gold member
      July 17
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      Excuse me...sentimentalist??? lol I am seeing so many sides to you lately I am shocked lmao!!!

  • sunshinegirl
    July 17

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    Well let's try this again! I love this one! I could almost hear it being sung as I was reading it! I love the images and tune that played in my mind as I was reading! Truly beautiful my friend!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love my friend

    Nyetta


  • PoeticLove
    July 17

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    This was sooooooo beautiful,

    All about love, what I got out of this was the love of a mother for her children, the love of God for his children, and the love of a lover for his true love. Maybe I'm wrong, but that's what I got from this lovely song. fantastic in every way. I loved, loved, loved it. BRAVO Allan. Bell x


  • Amera gold member
    July 17

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    This is not only beautifully composed, it is warm and spiritual. There is nothing more powerful than a mother's love and you used that emotion to its fullest.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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