Im brand new and right now I cant see ,
but in a few days I will be free .
My body im not sure yet
if it will be complete,
but with the way things are going
I think it's pretty neet.
Oh my goodness what's going on,
hey stop that now that's just wrong.
Mama mama help me please ,
I think someone is trying to steal me .
All of a sudden I feel a slap on the bottom of my feet,
and they made me cry and wake up from my sleep.
I felt myself wiggle and squirm to get away,
then I was in my mamas loving arms I was placed.
Oh mama you should have seen what I saw,
I was squeazed between some walls.
I tried to stop them but nothing worked,
and before I knew it someone gave me a jerk.
Then Oh I was so hungry and cold too,
I didn't know what they were gonna do.
I cried when they took me and manhandled me so
but when they were all done I heard them say he's ready to go .
Go where I need a nap don't you people understand,
then I felt someones finger from a familiar hand.
She spoke so gentle and my forehead she kissed ,
and let me eat and I replied I could get use to this .
Author notes
Then as they can see what wisdome do they hold and what do they lose over the years by our own teachings are we doing the best we can
A contest entry
- Write me a poem for a baby! by Crimson Viper.
600 points, ended August 27, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aw, this is cute. You did a good job writing this fromt he baby's perspective. You did a great job writing it keep up your good work!
Best of luck!
CrimsonViper -
Aw this is gorgeous! I wonder if this is really what they're thinking, hm? I guess we'll never know.. Well, best of luck in the contest. I hope you get a ranking =)
Much love,
Sammie xoxo -
Haha, I love this poem. I could so imagine a child saying and thinking this.
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Beautiful! There is no other word for this ! I love it! I wonder if that is actually what they think as they are being born... hmmmm gives one something to think about.
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Such a sweet poem. A poem about a little child, so sweet. I loved this grandma. :3 Keep on writing, until you can't no more! PLUS! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!!
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~Make Peace, Not War~
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