It’s funny how you don’t know you’re lost
Until you have been found
You don’t think there could be someone waiting
When you’re not looking around
I wasn’t expecting to happen
What has come to be
But you were there for the rescue
In your shitty little Laser TX-3
We’ve been through quite a lot
In the short time we’ve been together
You make me feel like we could get through anything
I know I want to be with you only, forever
In you’re arms I’ve never felt more safe
Like while you’re here nothing can go wrong
You make me feel like I can do anything
You make me feel so strong
I know sometimes I get mad at you
Sometimes I scream and shout
Please know that it’s only you babe
That I could never live without
I want you to know that I am so grateful
For everything little thing that you do
Thankyou for being kind
Thankyou mostly for being you
I wish there was a way I could show you
Of really making you see
Just how much I truly am in love with you
And what you mean to me
I know that I’m not always kind to you
And your love sometimes I don’t deserve
But baby to keep you here by my side
I’d move heaven and earth
A million smiles for you today babe
A hug, a squeeze, a big warm kiss
A million more for yesterday hun
And all the days that I’ve missed
There’s so many words inside I want to say to you
Thankyou for loving me despite my being crazy
I can’t wait to share my life with you
On that note, Happy birthday baby……
Author notes
Mmmm.... Well I wrote this as a present for my partners birthday, I havent written anything for a long time, so I'm a bit shaky. Please tell me what you think
Please tell me what you think
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aww this so sooo cute!!! GREAT JOB!!!
Hows the baby doing..
You was my mom on here remember me?
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Heya sweety
HIya, of course I remember you, i just rarely come on here anymore so i apologise for not being around more. Some AP mother i turned out to be hey haha. My little girl will be 2 next week, and I have just given birth to a little boy who is 2 weeks old today. Time goes so quick! Hope life is good for you, and that boyfriend of yours is treating you right.
<3 Mara
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Amazing read Mara good to see you are writing again
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Back again
I liked this poem so much, I returned to read it a second time---It Gets better with every read!!
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Excellent!!
A very heartfelt and sincere composition--Your honesty as well as your love radiates and is illuminated within this piece
Excellent flow of the unforced rhyming verse--Well done
and I hope your partner appreciates this dedication.
**Please note---I inadvertantly clicked onto this poem earlier by mistake while I was switching between screens and failed to leave a comment not knowing it would cost you points that you have earned--
I will compensate you shortly with a donation of 1000 points and please accept my sincere apologies for my stupid mistake!
. Rewarded 8
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awww
This is sweet! I think that your partner will like it! Keep up the good work!!
~Kayla~
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