Ebon silhouette
backlit by diamond stars
pictured perfection
A contest entry
- Haiku Workshop by azure85.
600 points, ended July 24, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ebon silhouette
backlit by diamond stars
pictured perfection
This is a nice view of a desert night. Your lines tend to be statements instead of images, can you bring them out a little more? Thank you so much.



