Thank you for the celebration!
You know, my dear, I was there.
I saw your sadness and elation
Healing pain you could hardly bare.
Tears and laughter filled the room.
Memories haunted and lifted
Feelings of joy and of gloom.
How time on earth has drifted!
A quarter of a century has passed
On earth where time is kept,
But in heaven, eternity will last
Replacing every tear you have wept!
You will join me in this celebration
Where the party will never end!
So I wait for you with anticipation
Till then, hold onto the love I send.
Author notes
Hold onto hope!
A contest entry
- My Son Died & It's His Birthday Today, How do I do this? by stavykm.
950 points, ended July 26, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
This is beautiful
Congrats on the Gold
It is indeed worthy of it
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Fabulous
Oh wow this is just beautiful. Excellently written and the rhyme is so perfect. Yes you wrote such a realistic poem of past, present and in future content. Thank you for the hope that just blessed my heart. You are a increadible poet and I so appreciate your loving compassion and you sharing your gift to write poetry with me during this difficult time. Wishing you well in the contest.
Wishing you as well many of blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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