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AP Poetic Songbirds ~(Dedication to the Ladies of AP)~

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Angels of elegance grace
Poetic satin and lace.

Peristyle pillars of ink well penning
Open, feminine, warm and winning
Eloquent spirits soulful transitions
Transpiring word quelled art renditions
Expressing feather pen written class
Shining from hearts of menagerie glass
Sensual, sexy and second to none

Special and warm as the rising sun
Oceans depths with tides resilience
Night skies in star light brilliance
Gracious demure of flow entrancing
Breathtaking their dreams romancing
Inspirational, diverse, minds intelligent
Reserved, refined, efficient and diligent
Divine diamonds, beautiful hearts we witness
Songbirds precious melodies of AP's harmonic poetess.  

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To the ladies of AP
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  • whispernthedark gold member
    September 27
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    Wonderful acrostic, such a sweet tribute the all the ladies on ap. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper

  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 5

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    A masterpiece of an acrostic! And so lovely penned..A real tribute to the poetesses among us! Lovely rhyming all the way through and beautiful vocabulary.

  • A lovely poem and a beautiful write!

    Thank you for entering it into my contest!
  • Aww

    This is so very cute. I'm sure you got alot of numbers this way. -winks- hehe. jkjk.
    It's really clever and the fact that it's acrostic , makes it that much more interesting. However you never posted what your option was for my contest. Tsk, Tsk.

    Thank you for your entry and good luck.

  • bosiarbooger gold member
    July 28

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    Your opening was so catchy a perfect place to way this wonderful tribute. You use of difficult rhyms made it all the better. Thank you for such a lovely read, Boog

  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 27

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    very lovely Acrostic for all us Ladies, thank you on part of those who miss this poem, I feel we are blessed to have wonderful friends like you to share all poetry with

    Linda

    . Rewarded 4


  • JinSays gold member
    July 27

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    This is absolutely perfect, Road Dog. It doesn't sound anything like me, or the tripe I put into words at all, but yes, I know there are songbirds here, and yes, they do alight, inspire, enliven and touch the lives and hearts of many here.
    Thank God for their beauty, and their grace. This is yet another beautiful write by you, to add to your vast collection.
    Take care,
    Jin

    . Rewarded 8


  • MariGoes gold member
    July 27

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    Lovely tribute to all the ladies in this site. Every man should write a poem like this one, after all women make all so much better
    Beautifully said


  • poet2angels silver member
    July 27

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    This is breathtaking !....
    Acrostics are so pretty when done well and this one flows so beautifully...Thank you for sharing this lovely dedication ...

    Lynda

    . Rewarded 4


  • Aisades gold member
    July 27
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    Nice work on this. This site has many very talented women.

  • My dear friend you know how to make one smile in their soul when their heart had felt like crying.(personal reason of invisibility thoughts) thank you for the honor of knowing and appreciation of you as well.thank you and many blessings always xxxx

    . Rewarded 6

  • What a deep and lovely tribute to the woman of AP. You must be very special to them and they you. I am totally in awe of your talent that resonates throughout this piece. Exceptional job!
    WoodsonRoundtree

    . Rewarded 4


  • NurseyPoo
    July 27
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    I love acrostics and you did this one beautifully. I sometimes have trouble with the rhyme but you carried it off with seemig ease. Pen on...

  • Grimoire
    July 27

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    ~ Shining from hearts of menagerie glass ~


    Menagerie? Uh, I suppose we are, all, a bunch of caged animals on display for exhibition. I often wonder, though, who is watching the unfolding freakshow of humans on Earth?

    http://www.rhymezone.com/r/rhyme.cgi?Word=menagerie&typeofrhyme=def&org1=syl&org2=l

    . Rewarded 4


  • condor
    July 27

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    Very good

    This was a delight to read. All the ladies out there would definitely feel special with this - and so they should. How you managed to use all those particular words to get that effect was amazing. I really like the first two line and the way you so sweatly told them how you felt. It was great.

  • This is extraordinary, I love your acrostic.


  • Darkwell silver member
    July 25

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    wow your good ladies look out we got a player

    this was so wonderful an it flowed like a single breath. you've truly put us on a very special and elegant pedestal.... and we deserve it

    Absolutely
    Wicked
    Scribing
    Of
    Masterful
    Evolution

    WTG! Good luck in the contest

  • marsu
    July 25
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    great

    Great poem, thank you for sharing

  • adsaige gold member
    July 24

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    Glad that I've read this beautiful poem! I don't really get dedications, so I feel special! I see why this is so popular! I will be surprised if this does not win anything.
  • Glad I caught this beautiful poem...I love words like these hahaha I counted myself in lol and good luck with it in the contest


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 23

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    This is a really beautiful piece.. What touching and sweet words you have used to describe woman.. I am sure with the words you have written here you have won the hearts of many.. I do not believe that anyone has ever said anything this beautiful to me or any other woman that I know of before... What a wonderful and sweet soul you have to share your thoughts with us and dedicating something this beautiful to poets of feminine disguise... I feel very blessed.. Many blessings and love to you poet..

     

     

    Angel


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 23
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    Thank you David for sending me this link. You've written a beautiful acrostic, not just for women on AP but for women in general.You have chosen your words well with both thought and love.
    I won't quote your words back to you, although some of the lines stood out for me.
    Thanks again for this, I feel honoured...Sue


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 23

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    Beautiful
    A wonderful acrostic, and each line paints so many words.
    Satin and silk, is part of my quote I use here..
    Thank you my friend
    Much love to you
    Julie xx


  • Thank you so much for sharing this with me and sending the link I am honored, truly honored to be classified with this write it is beautiful and exspressive the words you chose are elegant, graceful enlighting and wonderfully created, thank you so very much!


  • Nature Song silver member
    July 22

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    To all the women here on AP...We thank you for your kind words you pen from your heart. Nothing more can be said about this poem other than its fantasic! Thank you!! ~Sie


  • maralisa silver member
    July 22

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    Angels of elegance grace Poetic satin and lace.Special and warm as the rising sun Oceans depths with tides resiliencenspirational, diverse, minds intelligent
    Reserved, refined, efficient and diligent
    Divine diamonds, beautiful hearts we witness
    Songbirds precious melodies of AP's harmonic poetess.wow this is just so stunningly beautiful it makes me feel so proud and spratual to be one of these ladies on ap thank you for your wonderful words good luck in the contest


  • stavykm gold member
    July 22

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    Wow Stunning

    This is just beautiful. I can see all the woman adoring you and your beautiful poem that you've dedicated to them. To the ladies of AP. Yes I would agree there are increadible poetesses on here that are just as you described in your heartfelt poem. Their very hearts passioniate souls are rippling through the silent still waters!!!!!!!!!!! What beautiful vocabulary dancing throughout your poem. Best of luck to you in the contest.
    Wishing you many blessings
    Much Love
    Your Sis
    Kelle Marie

  • You did a fantastic job with this...How stunning you make a woman feel...I am woman hear me ROAR.
    I take your words to heart...They are outstanding.
    Good work Sexy
    Love
    Soulful Woman


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you for your kind words

      and as well you should take it to heart you are every bit of a women and every quality mented in is part you
      thank you
  • sirrah
    July 22
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    superlative

    I just love it


  • Desire gold member
    July 22

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    Precious~

    Gosh as Shania Twain once said:
    Man I feel like a Woman
    You certainly covered every base with Powerful expression merged with Sincerity
    Love this~
    and I can see how the cheeks would blush
    with Humility~ This is Gorgeous my Friend!
    These lines grab Spirit~
    Expressing feather pen written class
    Shining from hearts of menagerie glass
    Oh Heck they all grab
    Excellent Acrostic~
    Wahooooooooooooooooooooo~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • daviscth silver member
    July 22

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    Thank you so much for this wonderful tribute. It's a wonderful poem and I'm going to print a copy to keep if you don't mind. You are a wonderful person to have dedicted this to us.


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      I don't mind

      I would be honored, You all are the wonderful people the ladies who are wonderful
  • very precious and lovely write. I have been trying to do a few of these and they are not always easy.

    best of luck in the contest


    . Rewarded 4


  • Hetha gold member
    July 22

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    Aww.. this is so sweet, the form is lovely, and your words are so well chosen for us ladies. Thank you from the bottom of our hearts for such elegant dedication and praise. If this does not win the contest, I should be disappointed, as I'm sure many of the ladies would agree. Simply exquisite penning!

    . Rewarded 6


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you Hetha

      for your kind words , you are very welcome, It is all you ladies who deserve the praise . I am pleased you enjoyed it
  • Oh how sweet

    I so love this form of poetry I do a few myself at times and thankyou for such a lovely compliment for the ladies


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you storiesuntold

      you all deserve to be recognized I am glad you liked it
  • I'm so glad I came across this! I had to click on it because of the title, and I don't regret it one bit. This is beautiful, your rhyme is flawless, and we ladies are all very honoured that you would pen something so lovely for us. Thank you so very much, my friend.

    Love and light,

    Laura x

    . Rewarded 6


  • onesugar silver member
    July 22

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    This is a beautiful dedication and lovely acrostic (one of my faves) for the ladies of AP, your wonderful words are truly appreciated...
    All the best ~sugar~

    . Rewarded 4


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you sugar

      I am glad you enjoyed it I was hoping it would come out worthy of all you ladies because you all deserve it thank you.

    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      thank you room without doors

      for you wonderful comment I am glad you enjoyed
  • Outstanding

    The first thing I noticed about this poem was how good the flow is- it really seemed very effortless. I am sure all of us ladies at AP will enjoy this tribute poem - I certainly did. You write with great style and the imagery is smooth and well-chosen. Best of luck in the contest.

    . Rewarded 6


  • NurseyPoo
    July 22

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    An amazing write. Flow and meter are good and your message is beautiful. I appreciate your kind words for us ladies and will definitely read more of your work. Pen on...

    . Rewarded 4


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you Nursey Poo

      Love your AP name, Glad you enjoyed the poem and thank ytou for your kind words.
  • whoa i think this is a little out of my league to critique. honestly its beautiful and its muchly appreciated. good luck and keep penning things like this!

    . Rewarded 4


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      thank sleeping poppy

      very gald you enjoyed it thank you for your kind remarks
  • Speechless

    That is beautiful! My favorite is "gracious demure of flow entrancing"... That is such a perfect poem.


  • imahealer gold member
    July 22

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    This acrostic dedication reflects your respect and caring for all the female poets on this site, that have graced your eyes with their words. Even adding unforced rhyme was a real coupe! Bless your kind heart for entering a contest with panache and skill.

    Linda

    . Rewarded 6


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you Linda

      I am pleased that you enjoyed and thank you for your kind words
  • What a beautiful dedication.

    I love to read acrostics because I feel that they present their own challenge to the writer and yours is amazing.

    Best wishes in the contest.

    Love Margaret


    • Roaddog Wolf gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you Margaret

      I had been working on this one for better than a week just picking it up now and then and it slowly came together very nicely which is what I wanted to recognize all the ladies of AP
      thanks

  • SoldiersRain
    July 22

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    Wow. This was simply amazing. I found myself wishing I was a female. Hahaha. What about all us guys? I'd love to hear a poem of "the wolves of AP" or some such. Anyways. Great, great job. Loved it.

    Tal.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Frozentearz gold member
    July 22

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    ahhh you have outdone yourself this time this was simply a delight to read, May you continue to be blessed with the gift of your pen.
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz

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