Seems I may be moving
what real difference does it make?
Virtual space isn’t real ...
yet, I’m feeling my heart break.
We’re in different places now
we’ll be in different then
Moving makes no difference
the way it’s always been.
We’re only virtually speaking
it’s really no big deal
Why does speaking like we do
seem as if it’s real?
A break in time’s continuum
a break in my heart too.
Like I said, no big deal
no big hullabaloo.
We’re in different places now
we’ll be in different then
Moving makes no difference
the way it’s always been.
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Have to agree - a virtual winner.
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Awww this is so moving!
Awww this is so moving! (Forgive the pun!). Love the beautiful moving sentiments here, and the caressing flow and thought provoking essences here. Fabulous on poetric graphics and your pages are exquisitely designed too, what a lovely magical ambiance and so captivating and serene. Lovely empathic words and full of depth of feeling.
Hope you are in print, you are too good a poetess not to be.
Lovely! Bravo, Love it, well done!
Poetic Hugs.
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
Ps:Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
Glad you liked it.
Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience. Thanks also for the good luck wishes you are so kind.
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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thank you for the kind comment. I'm in print but it's only the AP book (the first one; Feeling's First) and a book published by YourPoetryDotCom ... a couple of analogies. A news paper just published a poem of mine too. I'm 60 years old so the clock is ticking
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Pretty good, virtually speaking, of course.
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