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Life Is A Willow, Expect To Weep From Time To Time.
© mary j. Zayas 2008

Shedding tears from time to time
may sometimes bring tranquility.
Cleansing the soul, like deep breaths
strengthening our fragility.

Weeping seems a part of life
as natural as the air.
Sometimes joy, sometimes love
and sometimes deep despair.

So glance up at each bending branch
take note of the willow.
Do not be shocked nor surprised
to find tears on your pillow.

This tree unique for it bends
in harsh winds that blow by.
Do not break, but be like it
not breaking when you cry.

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  • A wonderful poem you have penned.It is full of wisdom, and your quote is awesome.I really liked your write and wish you all the best in the contest.
    Blessings to you.
    Angel-anne~


  • tawk gold member
    July 31

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    So full of hope I so enjoyed reading your amazing poem. Wonderful imagery and I love your quote Good luck in the contest Theresa


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 27
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    This is so beautiful and serene
    to read! I really enjoyed reading
    it and thank you so much for taking
    the time to enter this contest.
    I wish you all the best with it in
    my contest!

    *Please review the contest rules and
    edit your poem*

    Thanks a lot for being an active member
    in this group and keep up the great work
    here!




    Jeremy0826
  • I like this sensitive piece of writing, it touches the spot but does not "over-egg" the pudding. Nicely balanced and euphonius.