Translucent wings enchanting
etched with vibrant aquamarine.
A beautiful lost butterfly queen
captured by a human hand
unable to soar across the land
dreaming of her lost freedom
and frozen liberty .
Author notes
option 1 picture promt 30 to 60 words
A contest entry
- Quickie Image Inspired by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
550 points, ended July 31, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congrats on the silver. This is an awesome entry and I just love the background.
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nice poem capured and unabe to soar.This could be the start of another pome..What happens when her freedom is lost..Id love to fine a butterfly so pretty for i might to the same. You deserve the silver!
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etched with vibrant aquamarine.. a fantastic line
A wonderful take from the prompt image
Thank you for your entry
and best wishes
Julie
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O'h Wow!
O'h Wow! O'h Wow! O'h Wow! This is just totally sensational, blew me away to read, this should get you Gold, pitty there isn't platimum! Gee what a fabulous piec eor poetic artistry, so rich in graphic and well chosen and used descriptves, you are extremely talented, and I hope you are in print, if not, you sure should be, your work is just phenomenal. Very well done this is magnificent, love it, bravo!
Thanks also for your lovely inspiring review of my poem you are so kind.
Best of Luck in this contest, hope you win!
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.XX
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Lovely wording and emotions in this. Goes well with the picture.
best wishes in the contest.
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I think this is a nice piece that you have done for this contest on the fifth line did you mean soar not sour ? Goodluck in hte contest best wishes
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omg! loved this!
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Excellent
Wonderfully crafted words. They go so well with the background. Best of luck in the contest.
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