so you're quitting
you're giving up
you're backing out of this mess
so you're leaving
you're packing up
you say you're in distress
this is over now
it's finished
but you better stop your grinning
your things are packed
but i'm telling you
at the end, there is a beginning
you don't understand
it isn't over
you're not quite off the ride
at the end of this
there is another
it's silly and useless to hide
the old goes out
the new, in
the cycle is never done
a new thing starts
for you today
and you're not the only one
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
4000 points, ended July 27, 24 entries
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hmmmm, interesting for one, but for the second this is golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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thanks
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Embrace limitation; then look beyond.
Bravo. I like the resiliency depicted in this. It's an admirable quality. Well said, well done. Your attitude will take you far... let it.
Kj
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