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[ My hearts torn in two ]

My hearts torn in two
I really like you.
I don't know what to do anymore.
Things were so much better before.
Things that were asked
Really unmasked
How i truly feel about you.

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  • Wrinkling Mind silver member
    July 26

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    hmmm I like the subtle rhyming in this. and you really pack a lot of emotion and convey what your feelings are in such a short poem. nicely done.