Bubbling heart
pouring out,
words tangled
in gossamer
of miscalculated emotions,
tears running on smile flimsy,
as reason gets buried in glare steely.
Soul shattered
by echoing shrieks
of speared heart,
intentions immaculate
shunned by glazed sight.
Author notes
The Devil Went Down To Georgia'
Crimsondew---
4.Title prompt-
A contest entry
- FOR MY AP FAVOURITES, INVITE ONLY!! by X-Queen-Georgia-X.
450 points, ended August 9, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh, what a poigant strike to the heart this one is - experienced many times.
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Very nicely done here I wish you much luck in her contest best wishes adn much love always
be well dear
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Thanks a lot sis!
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This is beautiful darling! I loved this take on the prompt, good luck
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Thanks dear!
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wow I really really like this.
It's pretty amazing.
"tears running on smile flimsy,"
^^ very nice!
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Thank you very much!
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