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For The Love Of Her

In the centuries that have
created her eyes, I am the student
eager to read between each lash,
to lift up the dark veils of what
she has seen, and to feel
the thrill of knowledge rushing
like a rampant river through my veins

I want to know her inside
and out, to feel the crashing of her
against me, waves pounding
a relentless path towards the edges
of earth, I want to kiss the volcanic
fire of her, drink the cool blue

of her inner core - she doesn’t know

how I long to read by her light,
to study her shadows with the tips
of my fingers, shatter the mirror
neither one of us cares to look into,
and lock our hands together

until our knuckles turn

to white ash...

 

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  • Liliana 3
    July 29

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    this is deep all girls long for a man like this it's in thier fantasies and you captured the soul and emotions of a man not afraid to say he's in love. this was very heart warming, a real tear jerker, reminds me of my boyfriend I feel so lucky, youve painted a realistic picture in my head and gave me an epiphany ThANK YOU and KEEP WRITING!

  • PerVirtuous gold member
    July 28
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  • I need a cigarette!!

    Oh man..so many great images!!! Love the last line!!! So many women have just killed off that beautiful enthralling Queen inside themselves!!!
  • I guess this just about say it. I can't add anything.
    Well maybe "you done good" lol
    Joe


  • tomisb gold member
    July 27

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    I never knew anything about sensual till I read you. Thanks for being the gift you are. I am sure that the one this poem is meant for is still discovering all the brush fires it started in her skin.
    Love, Tom B.


    • Dalaney gold member
      July 27
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      thanks, tom Mairi is a beautiful poet, woman, and she inspires me to always write with passion. Love, Lane
  • All I can say is that the best of art, is indescribable.

    Whew!

    I was lucky to get that out.
    Speechless.


  • nordicsky silver member
    July 27

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    Still searching for her essence Lane?

    The last stanza got to me...such yearning.

    Your writes delight me,
    Love, Peter

  • oh my. What an honorable write for someone you admire so much.
    Obviously, I loved it

    Meg~


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    July 26

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    Beautiful...and I'm carried to a place that I often do not visit.


    Love and peace always,
    mj.


  • pops
    July 26
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    Non-paralleled

    No words.

  • Arzab
    July 26

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    This is a very beautiful write, Lane. Especially the part of reading between each lash. It seemed metaphorical, like looking into the eyes to see the soul inside. Thanks for sharing your talent and keep that pen flowing.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 26
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    Boffo!

    Love the idea of you reading by her light.
    It oughta be like that.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 26

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    The perfect writes for the great. I am smiling inside and out.

    Wonderful stuff

    Truly wonderful.


  • ariosto gold member
    July 26

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    Is this who I think it is?

    Blood is thicker than water isn't it.

    Very powerful words Mermaid, from somewhere down deep.


    love
    D


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 26

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    Love this!

    want to know her inside
    and out, to feel the crashing of her
    against me, waves pounding
    a relentless path towards the edges
    of earth,


  • SweetJane
    July 26

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    So beautiful.

    Keep writing Delaney
    I love your words.


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    July 26

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    I'm jealous, Lane..
    You should read by my light.

    Ahem...

    This is beautiful writing




  • Mairi bheag gold member
    July 26

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    For a piece written by someone who fights shy of passion, this is very passionate. It is also typical of "you" as you currently write - less sparse, but no less expressive. That shines out through the images here. The poem has an undisciplined quality which I like very much. Mmm.

    "Not bad", k-c.


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