"I bid thee, welcome."
words drift on a sigh
hanging in the stale air -
paradise birds
trapped in a cage.
Hypnotic, their call
manipulating emotions,
honeyed glazing
coating malicious,
devious intent,
I enter, oblivious.
Author notes
34 words
Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Quickie by Rainbow Lips.
300 points, ended July 27, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel free to be as critical (or not) as you like...
Comments
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very beauiful and great choice of words.
all the very best in the contest
cheers -
I love how you took such a beautiful picture and made a gorgeous poem
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OMG this is just totally awesome for 34 words. I hope that you get gold with this piece because I just love it!
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