If you follow every contour
what will my soul reveal?
Not my piety, nor my mind
for they are deeply concealed,
I know how to love!
You must learn first
this kindness in m'heart.
Upon shelves of gladness;
I have stored all of
life's pangs, sadness.
Because; this is where
life has failed m'spirit.
Putting the best on
the outside; all m'beauty.
Guess whats behind
this sultry smile.
Now observe softness of body
as I sway in the wind.
Your job is cut-out for you
where do you begin?
Author notes
This quote is a prompt: "I am trying hard to map the woman's beauty but"...Unknown.
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A contest entry
- the woman's beauty... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 8, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh my God!
This is amazing!!!
I have read it several times--
I am enthralled! It's sultry
mysterious and very alluring
not to mention
written in your usual
perfection!
I love your style!
~Pastel
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yes..so true and so imaginativce thought you have sketched..I love it..my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write ...
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excellent
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Excellent Poem
Excellent poem well written i liked the beginning and the end it was a sweet poem.
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I feel that it is hard to map a womans body because there are so many different kinds of woman...we are all a mystery...it is one of lifes gifts..well done,thanks for sharing
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