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Dark temptation


As the plague spreads upon the burnt bodies
And curtains are raised, unleashing the darkness.
The audience stands still, silent, in remorse, witnessing
                    The death process

Running through the painted crevices,
Each curve, telling its story.
The color leaving its temporary domain, giving itself into
                    The dark temptation.

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Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx
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  • Reading this gave me chills! absolutely brilliant. Superb imagery - I absolutely love this:
    "The audience stands still, silent, in remorse, witnessing
    The death process"
    Excellent write! Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,

    Luck.