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a Rose for Momma

I picked a rose for momma,
the color was shiny red.
And when she went to smell it,
she looked at me and said.

"It reminds me of JESUS,
and the blood that he shed.
The thorns on the stem,
like the ones they placed on his head."

As I listened to the story,
a tear filled my eye,
my cheeks became wet,
for I began to cry.

The story is very sad,
but look what GOD has done.
He loved us so much,
he gave his only son.

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  • Leeanna Nierman

    It was beautiful!
  • That was beautiful!
  • Good lyrical poem.

    Enjoyed this fine poem.

  • Welcome to Allpoetry!

    Wow, I've never thought of a rose that way, it so true. And it's so amazing that God sent his only son for us. Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing, I hope you enjoy yourself here!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~
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  • Denerica
    July 26

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    Like a rose

    I love the song Above all and this poem brings me back to that vision, like a rose trampled on the ground, short and to the point, I like it.

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