Rain falling hard from the clouds
Collecting in valleys in the grass
Puddles, a fun form of playing
The part swing soaked with water
Water in the sandbox
Mud around the wood-chip playground
A little girl runs around between the drops
Smiling wildly and caked with mud
Her dress town tattered and too small
She ran to the swings and sat down
This little girl tried to swing
But it did not work, wishing someone could push her
Rays of sunshine broke through the clouds
Shining upon the little girl's face
To her happiness someone started pushing her
The rain stopped all together
She jumped off of the swing and looked behind
Her Savior Jesus was standing there
He told her it was time
For her to come home with him
Taking her hand he leads her away
Instead of playing in the rain by herself
The little girl now dressed in a pretty white dress
She plays with her Savior in the heavenly rain
Once ignored by everyone on earth
But her heavenly father loves her so much
He took her home away from her pain
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful!
Aww this is so beautiful and moving as well as very inspiring and heartwarming too, you have a lovely strong faith and that does you great credit, bless you for that.
Love the enchanting essence of this wonderful poetic masteroiece, so rich in poetic graphics and fine sculpting, you sure know how to pen a moving poem and this is phenomenal, I hope you are in print, if not you sure should be.
Well done, love it, bravo!
Ps:
Thank you so much for kindly awarding me a Silver in your wonderful contest, which was an honour to be in. I am so chuffed, and I can hardly believe I got Silver, its like a dream come true, I am shocked and ecstatic.
You do me a great honour. This means more to me than you could know! it is a huge inspiration and encouragement to me.
Thanks Millions and Millions!
Poetic Thanks & Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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ah yes, very sad, but sweet. bittersweet, really. great write, i enjoyed reading it :]
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Wow. This is a really good poem. Its kind of sad but at the end it is really nice to know that she is happy again. Great job!
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All about life
Like going about everyday distresses, it says, life goes on, and through all things you aren't alone, and sometimes our reward is not here on earth but with Jesus in Heaven.
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Excellent Poem Well Written
Your poem was sweet in the beginning and sad towards the end well written poem.
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