Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
 

The Pit Of Desperation

The ache in your gut that's always there

Is tearing you apart...


Love?


Only in vain.

Live?

Only in pain.


Lost, uncertain, and ready for anything....

Ready to jump on the moment, and stab it in the eyes.

Gross discussion of inpure thoughts.

Justice, and Mercy

Suicide and aroma therapy.

Burn a candle for me.

I can't see the light.

Is It Publishable?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments


  • nevadapoet gold member
    August 17
    ?
    Edit | Reply
    The light is within you!!! Great write...I can't wait for the next one...Please share again soon.
    Nevadapoet

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 27

    Edit | Reply

    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Burn a candle for me, I can't see the light.
    Intense ending as your poem flows well down the page and into imagery flawlessly

    Wonderful poem!
    ♥
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    Site Greeter

  • SpydurPoet silver member
    July 26

    Edit | Reply
    Wow. That's an interesting poem. I love the image of stabbing a moment in the eyes, and I love the line "suicide and aroma therapy." I can't place why, though.
    Welcome to AllPoetry.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~