im waiting here
looking at the rain smear..
its cold , i got nothing
to hold.
because im waiting
waiting for you to show your face
but theres no trace
why leave me standing
its not fair i cant see you
anywhere..
think of me while im wating
i bet you wont..
as i think the cold hits
my throat..
standing in the street
watching peoples feet...
as the rain splashes
and falls like ashes
you dont care
oh look i can see you
over there
but by looks of your face
you dont wanna be in this place..
A contest entry
- Rhymed prewrites only ... by ecrivain01.
800 points, ended July 31, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THIS TIME i'M GOING TO WIN (pt. 2) by written-in-ink.
1000 points, ended September 13, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow
very nice
i have been there before trust me
gah have i been there
love the place that you took this
it was very
very nice
thank you so much and good luck -
great write xx
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Sorry that you are ...
going through a rough time.
Good luck with your writing in the future.
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