i open the door
and there you are
with your blue essence
not noticing me
still i crave you
the sweetness on my lips
the bubble of your contents
how you perk me up
diet?!
blasphemy...
i cant stand the taste of diet pepsi
A contest entry
- why do you live by smokeringsandscully.
650 points, ended August 2, 31 entries
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Comments
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creative
this write is creative and cute,
shows ur ability to be versatile,
and catch the readers attention.....
leaving the endingto be a suprise!
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This really shows your potential to be a serious poet. I like it. Every time I want to smile I read one of your poems. and I also love how you wait to reveal to the reader what the poem is actually about. very mysterious
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heehee
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