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Whisper

We're in a room together
I try to touch your hair
You shake me off and look away
I retreat, watch you repair

You're quiet, breathing slowly
You sit and watch the moon
I left the window open
Her words will tell you soon

I wonder what you're thinking
More so if you'll show me
The more I see of your sweet soul
I'll never let you be

As the night goes on and on
The stars turn into rain
And you sing softly, whispered words
In a voice that keeps me sane.

Author notes

Picture inspired by groovebox. I saw the picture and wrote this down out of nowhere. I seriously think pictures are the best for inspiration, because I love this piece!
Cheers,
Cj

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  • JinxyCat gold member
    July 26
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    I do love this piece very much. I can tell that you were really inspired by the picture and I am so happy that it did in fact inspire you. You did actually exceed the 50 word limit. I won't be mad at you for that, just wanted to let you know. I really did enjoy this piece tho. It was quite beautiful actually. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.