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Text Poetry #2

Abundant redundancies in a life of heart shaped miseries like powder strewn across the floor
Abundant inconsistencies in violent violet tragedies, screaming their protests in overbearing harmony
Saints reviving poetry like spirits hidden in the trees, reality is dead to me, a faint receding memory
Like ashes dripping to the floor, lonely, wanting company, bashful to their sympathies, too young for love, too high to breathe
Responding only to the call of responsibility, evasive of her destiny, reality breathes only in my dreams
A phone rings faraway while shes singing in the shower. Crying on her knees, praying tears, no reply, no desire, her device has left me spineless and undone
Blow my mind outta time, its my scene, my only crime is the smell of nicotine

Author notes

explanation: i was basically tripping on pot and i started texting my boyfriend all this random shit. yes, i actually texted ALL that, theres more too (and this one would have gone on but his battery was dying, lol). idk how. each line is basically one text message and i copied it word for word

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