A part of me
you touched
inside-
before I found you,
today, you still do.
Author notes
Quote inspired - You fill up my senses, come fill me again.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 31, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: You Still Do
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: A part of me touched-
being shown what appears to be an urn- also reference to silver-
hearing what sounds like dew drops- but seeing if come off a flower-
down the stem- after reading, seeing a female running through a field as if going to greet another- for some reason I am being nudged to mention-
the line- before I found you- I am getting nudged to mention again- when I found you, whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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this reminds me of my husband who left me behind I keep praying do not know how it going to work out. I love your write it touched i am having a hard time not knowing how it going to turn out. Just one step at a time. Take care
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This is Love
Few words, speak of the world...
words come from your heart
only to reach its destination - reader's heart.
Good luck in the contest babe... take care luv ya Minoo
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Awe. Nyetta, this is beautiful. I'm sorry I haven't been around to talk to you on the IM and such. I haven't been in the area.
My car died whilst near my Dad so I've been here catching up with him & my sister. This poem made me smile, which is something I needed considering the past 48 hours. I love both you & justin.
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