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Good Night Kiss

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A warm embrace…
cheeks touching, the softness of skin…
lips lightly brushing, then seeking to meet…

the feel of warm breath…
tongue lightly tracing the soft
contours of the mouth…

feeling the welcoming parting
and descending into the warmth…
tongues playfully touching…

feeling the rush of desire.

A kiss that takes our breath away
and lingers into our dreams.



Author notes

The lips are the most sensual part to the body... Nothing compares to a great kiss *sigh*
Prompt: 'I Kissed a Girl' by Katy Perry
Picture Credit: http://gwarf.deviantart.com/art/Last-Kiss-25493188
50 words more or less (I used 59)

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  • Lucy. gold member
    August 1

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    Sigh...lovely.
    Kisses....mmmm.

    (second to last line, breath)

  • this is so beautiful... awww *sigh**sigh* nice calming, sensual poem you have written. you are right nothing can compare to a great kiss.

    good luck in the contest

    kat