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Something Broken

What is the reason to fight
Endless pain in their life
Injection of the needle in the vain
To cover the depths of this pain
Addiction is the ruthless of all evil
To thoughts who lives are fable
To suffer the same day by day
Watching there lives fade away
Do they ever fell any shame
To there endless prideful, game
Realize there path effects other
To not feel the trust from your own mother
In the next word would be a lie
To make ourself die
Inside the heart  wants to turn back
Making us turn black
Will I ever trust again
I guess we wont know until the end

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  • Shining eyes
    August 18
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    This isn't completely what I was looking for, but I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering.

  • babygirl2582
    July 27
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    Amazing Write

    However Look it over before the contest ends I think there are a few errors