cheer cheer cheer
one two three
go team go
fat kid runs slow
1st place
gold medal
hometown hero
driving his camaro
snorting the good shit
making a show of it
dating the rich chick
abercrombie
ripped jeans
iced tea
stay the fuck away from me
4.0 gpa
open your legs, get an A
blah, blah, blah, blah
you all get everything you want
daddy's brand new mastercard
football field in your backyard
fifteen butlers kissing your ass
a fleet of mexicans to mow your grass
natural blond
takes it off
for the cock
of mr football jock
separate, colonize
orchestrate, organize
pick your clique
cunts or dicks
Author notes
For my brother--who told me, "this poem fucking sucks"
A contest entry
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300 points, ended September 3, 159 entries
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Welcome to Allpoetry
Ok firstly, let me just request that you move this poem into the "adult" theme, due to the use of "cunts or dicks"
Kids under the age of 15 shouldn't see the page is all.
As for the poem. I love it.
I love how in your face it is, that it shows things from that life from a different perspective. Very powerful.
Welcome to Allpoetry and I hope that you enjoy your stay
Should you have any questions, please feel free to ask me
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nice i like it u should check of my poems soon
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Wow... this doesn't suck! It's just raw and real! I love it... kind of like a song, if it had a chorus! I loved it =]. It portrays some high school kids so well
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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thank you thank you thank you
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Nice poem! ^.^ keep up the great work.
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All hail.. hating highshool!
very true right, though some the the truth mentioned don't really happen where I come from.
Excellent write.
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Yeah, yeah. It's funny because there are some things about highschool that I really love. But sometimes I just get fed up and write angry poems about it, hah.
Thanks for the comment
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wow,this writing was straight foward and in your face like KABAM!! A very emotional filled write thate is purely brillant!
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Thank you. I'm glad it's like 'KABAM!!'
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very creative and real
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Props on a lot of these rhymes and this had an unusual but very addictive and entertaining rhythm. Nice write. And good luck; the day after graduation was one of the happiest of my life b/c it sank in that I'd made it through Hell alive. Best wishes and may you graduate ASAP.
-Odyssey
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Thanks. One more year left....I'm counting down the days.
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i agree
Most people are like that so thats why i love it so much because thats how most hight school people are
and the *bunny* for the cuss words AWSOME!
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thanks for the comment...and the points!
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There was something very real and powerful about this piece and I really liked it. The world of highschool is unfair and often cruel. Just shortly removed I'm glad to see that many highschool "failures" are doing quite well in the real world.
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Yeah, highschool can be hell. Luckily there's other people there like me, hah. Thanks for the comment
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