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red jeep memories.

what I miss most
is how the world seemed
to fade away when
we were cruising
the back roads in
your bright, shiny
red jeep.
when we had the windows
rolled down,
cigarettes lit,
screaming our lungs out
to miley cirus,
I didn’t have a care
in the world.

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inspired by what you said, babe. "nothing feels like old times anymore."

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  • LaurenLightning--x
    July 26
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    Oh, this just throws me back into reality.
    Short, simple and to the point. Everything I love about a poem, and ontop of all that you got a reaction out of me. I'm literally in awe I really don't know what to say.
    It sucks when you realise everything has to change.

    Beautiful poem, I love it.

    LaurenLightning--x


  • weird.quiet.girl
    July 26
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    i like it..-sighs- things are really changing..