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When running rampit past the shoreline

the smell of salt can fill the mouth

while, lies in your hand,

a sea stone, white and round.

You unfurl your lips and say

"You are my lucky stone."

I clench my jaw

and force a smile,

hating every stir you sound.

Lucky stones have holes in them.  

Perhaps you think I am incomplete,

that I still have places to fill.

Or maybe I am old and withered,

becoming decrepit with the tides.

I clench my jaw 

and force a smile.

The smell of salt can fill the mouth.

Don't let that smell get to your eyes darling,

it burns.

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  • Sweaters
    July 28
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    I like this. Thee is somethnig about it, I can't put my finger on it. It's just nice.